Website Design Job Descriptions

Question regarding job description for my resume…?
does this sound okay
Marketing Coordinator
Help members of the organization move their business forward with marketing advise and consulting. Design, layout, copy write, and edit 12-page monthly newsletter and weekly e-newsletter. Create all marketing materials for events and seminars as well as invitations, logos, and program books. Update and manage website with content management tools. Assist event coordinator in planning social networking events for area businesses.
It’s pretty long for a resume.
What about
Move organization forward with marketing advise and consulting. Design, layout, copywrite, and edit newsletters (weekly e-news and 12 page monthly). Create all marketing materials for events/seminars including invitation, logos, and program books. Assist event coordinator in planning social networking events. Update and manage website.
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